Sales messages that sizzle - just fill-in-the-blanks and go!
Here’s a great little formula you should apply to every single sales message you send out, long or short, email marketing or conventional print – even advertisements.
It’s been used by direct marketers for decades for the simple reason that it works. It also makes constructing your sales message easy. Just fill in the blanks and go!
AIDCA stands for:
A: Attention
I: Interest
D: Desire
C: Conviction
A: Action
ATTENTION
Grab your reader’s attention via the subject line and/or headline (sometimes called strapline). This should be a single-minded message that goes straight for the jugular. Pick out your strongest benefit and focus on that exclusively. Sound urgent and exciting. Instantly identify with the reader’s main problem and show how you’re about to solve it.
TIP: Keep it brief and always use the active tense i.e. “We do this” rather than “We are doing this”.
INTEREST
Okay, so now you’ve grabbed their attention, really make them want to buy your product or service. Get straight to the point. Briefly outline your main benefits and answer the 'what's in this for me?' question. And keep the urgent / exciting momentum going rather than slowing down the pace.
Don’t lecture. Involve the reader as if it was a face-to-face conversation. The aim is to have your readers nodding their heads in agreement with you. And all in no more than one short paragraph, two max.
TIP: When you’ve finished, go back and see if you actually need your first paragraph. Removing it may help you get to the point faster. You may find it’s little more than ‘setting out your stall’ waffle.
DESIRE
Go on to (briefly) demonstrate how your product or service makes their life easier, gives the reader more time or money, or makes them better business people. Tell them something they don’t know. Make things sound irresistible but DON’T go for overkill with lots of exclamation marks or you risk looking naff (!!)
TIP: This is the place for bullet points if you want to include them. Really work those bullet points so they demonstrate true benefits, not just boring features.
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I'm curious as to why you
Fri, 03/27/2009 - 17:06 — john (not verified)
Umm, this seems
Wed, 03/25/2009 - 18:55 — Marten (not verified)
Nice article
Tue, 03/24/2009 - 23:08 — Alrayes (not verified)
Nice application of this
Mon, 03/23/2009 - 14:32 — Ricky Warren (not verified)
Where have conviction and
Mon, 03/23/2009 - 13:01 — Anonymous (not verified)
Where have conviction and
Mon, 03/23/2009 - 13:01 — Anonymous (not verified)
I love this. I am curious as
Thu, 03/12/2009 - 17:28 — Avangelist (not verified)
I love this.
I am curious as to why the summary is suggested as being the last thing in the list (DESIRE - Go on to (briefly) demonstrate how your product or service makes their life easier, gives the reader more time or money, or makes them better business people.)
Surely this should be your lead message?